Trailer Draft 2

This is the second draft of my trailer, although there is still other improvements that need to be made based on my audience feedback and I am very much aware that there is a large amount of footage that needs to be added. However since my large version of my trailer a few days ago, I have manipulated the sound based on audience feedback and I have added 'bookmarks' to the start and end of my trailer to give it more of a professional look.

Take a look at my second draft below!